Thursday, December 13, 2007

remarkable eyes

I posted a story I wrote recently here. It's nothing special, but it spontaneously came out of me, and I had time during my internet-less period to write it out. So Enjoy!

3 comments:

Captain Gavman said...

That's really cool. I'm beginning to feel the urge to create again myself.

Your fascination with pirates is well.... fascinating. I think maybe it's being in a foreign place, it brings out your inner pirate.

Anonymous said...

They are like semi-precious stones.

Anonymous said...

Hmmm goeie stukkie skryfwerk....as ek mag (!), dan wil ek net voorstel dat jy die tenses ko-ordineer i8n die stuk. Jy gaan van past na present na past tense....dit mag dalk verwarrend wees.
Maar andersins, 'n baie mooi vergelyking, seunie.
Howz the lionz?
PA